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Feb 14, 2022Liked by Patrick E McLean

Wow. So moving and done with so few words. I loved the masterful timing of your narration at the end there. You left more pause between the sentences than I was expecting, and it was perfect.

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Moral of the story: Never give up hope.

“They were drowning in sunshine.” Great line, by the way.

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