In chapter 2, when you replied to my comment, you said that this story is “not a typical Western”. I think I’ve fully internalized that now. I like the fantastical turn A Town Called Nowhere took.
“He had an ugly, sorta pushed-in face. Like somebody had let a horse kick him when he was a baby.“
This line was straight up Dickensian in quality. He was good at describing peoples faces. Another great chapter. So glad you’re publishing again after that short break. I’m excited to discover more of this upside down world.
Aw thanks man. But I'm reading Bleak House right now, and let me tell you -- Dickens. Had. Game. I'm not in his league, but I'm trying to get picked for that draft.
I should read more of his work. I haven’t read that one. I read A Christmas Carol every year in December, and enjoyed Great Expectations and A Tale of Two Cities. He was a prolific author with pen and paper, your preferred first draft method. I enjoyed your update video today. Your method sounds awesome and it’s cool how well it’s working for you.
In chapter 2, when you replied to my comment, you said that this story is “not a typical Western”. I think I’ve fully internalized that now. I like the fantastical turn A Town Called Nowhere took.
“He had an ugly, sorta pushed-in face. Like somebody had let a horse kick him when he was a baby.“
This line was straight up Dickensian in quality. He was good at describing peoples faces. Another great chapter. So glad you’re publishing again after that short break. I’m excited to discover more of this upside down world.
Aw thanks man. But I'm reading Bleak House right now, and let me tell you -- Dickens. Had. Game. I'm not in his league, but I'm trying to get picked for that draft.
I should read more of his work. I haven’t read that one. I read A Christmas Carol every year in December, and enjoyed Great Expectations and A Tale of Two Cities. He was a prolific author with pen and paper, your preferred first draft method. I enjoyed your update video today. Your method sounds awesome and it’s cool how well it’s working for you.
Well, there you go. Someone could see into the mine's future.