Just catching up? Here’s the story so far in ebook and audiobook format If you’re already on board, take a minute to leave a review on Part I on Amazon. — Sheriff John Dance hadn’t slept much. When the night started, they didn’t have any customers, so he sat outside on the porch waiting for the heat to die down. About eleven he took a quick turn around the town. There were few drunks, but everything was quiet enough. Those goddamn cowboys from Burdock’s place weren’t in town, so nobody was expecting trouble.
In chapter 2, when you replied to my comment, you said that this story is “not a typical Western”. I think I’ve fully internalized that now. I like the fantastical turn A Town Called Nowhere took.
“He had an ugly, sorta pushed-in face. Like somebody had let a horse kick him when he was a baby.“
This line was straight up Dickensian in quality. He was good at describing peoples faces. Another great chapter. So glad you’re publishing again after that short break. I’m excited to discover more of this upside down world.
In chapter 2, when you replied to my comment, you said that this story is “not a typical Western”. I think I’ve fully internalized that now. I like the fantastical turn A Town Called Nowhere took.
“He had an ugly, sorta pushed-in face. Like somebody had let a horse kick him when he was a baby.“
This line was straight up Dickensian in quality. He was good at describing peoples faces. Another great chapter. So glad you’re publishing again after that short break. I’m excited to discover more of this upside down world.
Well, there you go. Someone could see into the mine's future.