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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

I finally listened to the audio for this chapter. It’s really good! It makes me wish I had listen to the audio from the very beginning. I’m gonna listen to the audio for the rest of this novel.

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DanDanTheArtMan's avatar

I loved the way you introduced music at 6:57 when Virgil took action. Epic. Awesome chapter.

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Richard Ware's avatar

Kudos for including a Spanish-language obscenity I was not previously familiar with.

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Patrick E McLean's avatar

I know very little about anything, but I do know how to research like one should rob a jewelry store. Grab what you need and keep going. :-)

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