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Gillsing's avatar

I like it when one chapter feels like an entire book. I think the first time I experienced that was in Clive Barker's "The Great and Secret Show". Though I'll admit that was a longer chapter than this one. Or maybe it was more than on chapter.

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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Poor Virgil.

I wonder, if Grantham were to ever return to where it had been, will some or all of it just fall into the ground now that there’s a big hole where it used to be?

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DanDanTheArtMan's avatar

Dang Virgil. That’s one of the saddest things I’ve ever heard! You keep digging you old romantic man in love. I wasn’t expecting this quick leap through years of time to pass. I’m interested to see how you balance that with the timelines of the other characters. Cool chapter!

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