Dance crawled until he passed out. He couldn’t say how long he slept, but he was brought back to consciousness by the peaceful sound of his horse cropping grass close to his head. At this he spasmed in fear, rolled onto his back and crab-walked backwards, scrambling for his pistol. His horse looked at him evenly, knowing him for the fool that he was. When Dance realized his situation, he replaced his half–unholstered pistol and said a prayer of gratitude. Then he started looking for his hat.
I’ve been so busy, but I finally got around to listening to another chapter. That was awesome! Terrifying with that creature and the oppressive darkness. Cool creepy stuff! I love it. I could picture him up on that A-frame of ladders. I have to know what happened to him.
The line about Dance looking like 20 miles of bad road was awesome. I wish more authors sprinkled that quality of prose in their stories like you do. I love it. It’s what I find in the classics, but unlike many of those your story isn’t boring and leaves me wanting more with each chapter.
As a pastor, the character of the pastor was super interesting to me. I think you did a good job with his dialogue and how he acts. Can’t wait to keep going with this story!
So much happens in this chapter! Wow! I am very concerned for everybody!
I’ve been so busy, but I finally got around to listening to another chapter. That was awesome! Terrifying with that creature and the oppressive darkness. Cool creepy stuff! I love it. I could picture him up on that A-frame of ladders. I have to know what happened to him.
The line about Dance looking like 20 miles of bad road was awesome. I wish more authors sprinkled that quality of prose in their stories like you do. I love it. It’s what I find in the classics, but unlike many of those your story isn’t boring and leaves me wanting more with each chapter.
As a pastor, the character of the pastor was super interesting to me. I think you did a good job with his dialogue and how he acts. Can’t wait to keep going with this story!
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we got attacks by land, sea and air so far. Next chapter is a cyber attack no doubt.
No idea how dance kept from shooting (at) his horse when he awoke.